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"I... I thought you were going to get killed," Kael admitted, his voice rough. "You walked right into his line of fire. That was reckless, Commander." Lesson in Loyalty -Chapter 3-
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"Jarek," Silas called out, his voice ringing with authority. "You’re out of options. You shoot me, the kid behind me puts two in your chest. You miss, and I put two in yours. You drop the gun, and you go to a cell. A warm cell. With hot food. It’s better than a grave."
He was trembling because of the man standing beside him.
Kael looked at him, confused. "Sir?"